Is this essay controversial/ risky to send to college admissions?

<p>Comment and I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Wouldn’t it be more effective to let your teacher or counselor read it?</p>

<p>Well it’s summer and none of my teachers are working I would have to wait till school starts. I’m assuming your Vietnamese, I am too!</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I’m interested.</p>

<p>I’m interested.</p>

<p>Surprisingly some teachers do monitor their work email over the summer and might be open to reading it. Or you could wait until they are back. Sending your essay to random people on the internet seems strange…maybe you could ask your next door neighbor too. Good luck!</p>

<p>I agree with CalifLaxMom. My teachers check their email almost everyday over the summer, even though they are off. Just make sure you look at people’s previous posts to know who you’re sending your essay to; it might not be a good idea to send your essay to rising seniors, and it wouldn’t help you any if someone replied because they were curious of your topic as opposed to a seasoned essay reader/proofreader.</p>

<p>im interested as well.</p>

<p>My comment is the same. My advice is to trash it and start from scratch. What I learned about writing is to learn to let go of your babies. Do not cherish it. If it does not work, it needs to go. Cold hard truth. You re-posted this because you received criticism in your old thread. If you were looking for complements, don’t even bother asking.</p>

<p>I thanked all of my teachers about my ap scores, and every single one of them replied.</p>

<p>I’ll read the essay</p>

<p>i’ll read it</p>

<p>I want to read it! :)</p>

<p>I want to read it!</p>

<p>I will too, please.</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>PM me too!</p>