Is this essay good enough for Yale?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>Yeah that's what I was talking about earlier.</p>

<p>It has that...forced aspect to its humor...and moreoever, yeah, the idea is original, but the way its written reminds me too much of other things I've read.</p>

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<p>If you need another reader, i ll read it too and give u my suggestions</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>Gilla -
Phooey. The thing is, that is about as creative as I get.</p>

<p>Everyone else -
Thanks for all your help.....I'm done asking for critiques now.</p>

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<p>Ripping off never hurt.</p>

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<p>Nah, don't listen to 'em, Gorbachev. I just read it a few minutes ago, and I loved it! It's quirky, yet intelligent. It's definitely NOT a liability in you app; it'll probably be a great asset.</p>

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<p>Thanks!!!!!</p>

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<p>send me the essay!</p>

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<p>If you want to read my essay, IM me:</p>

<p>Leper Fuhrer</p>

<p>It was 525 words, but then I fixed it and now it's...623.</p>

<p>Is that bad? It's exactly one page (including double my name and a space between it and the actual essay)</p>

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<p>Oh wait, wrong thread.</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you need anyone else, but i warn you my critique will be as long as it needs to be, and to the point... (i will check grammar/ usage as well, if you so desire)</p>

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<p>I think it's time to put this thread to bed....
I've already sent my essays, so there's really no point.</p>