<p>I'd really like someone to tell me what they think of my first draft of an option for the common app essay. It's really the only one that I've written that sounds sort of like me while the other drafts I have with different ideas- well those don't sound connected. They're scattered, and I feel like this one's my only hope, but it's just not... as exciting or quirky as I'd like it to have been. =/ </p>
<p>So yeah, some help would be greatly appreciated :) Thank you to anyone who responds! Just PM me!</p>