Is this ready to send in?

<p>My friend thinks that my Common Application Personal Statement is good enough to send in to my colleges at this point, but I am having doubts. Can someone please read it so I can have a second opinion?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance...</p>

<p>I'll check it if you will check mine! :D</p>

<p>sure, pm me yours. i'll pm u mine</p>

<p>Feel free to Pm it. I'll read it.</p>

<p>if you need another person to read it, you can message it to me!</p>

<p>ill read it too</p>