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I am not going to lie when I first heard the name Rice the initial thought that came to mind was not a university. Boy, was I wrong.
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<p>Too cheesy as an intro? Or acceptable?</p>
<p>“boy, was I wrong” sounds really cheesy. I’d at least take that part out, but the rest may be workable</p>
<p>university was not the first thought that came to mind.</p>
<p>Remove Boy at least. Otherwise fine.</p>
<p>**** my writing.</p>
<p>I wish they had us do a math problem</p>
<p>^ haha =]
I actually really like the first sentence!</p>