<p>I'll PM my essay if you're willing to give me contructive opinions, comments, suggestions, etc.</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm me.</p>
<p>So will I.</p>
<p>I'd be glad to comment on it.</p>
<p>Don't ask what NU or any college is "looking for". That is a wrong way to approach an essay. </p>
<p>To have the best chance to craft your most genuine, most authentic and most persuasive, if not most compelling, writing: forget about the Admissions Committee. Don't pretzel, betray yourself by trying to fit a conception of what someone else supposedly is looking for. </p>
<p>Be independent; think on your own. Look inside; find and give them yourself in the essay.</p>
<p>good advice, that's what I'm going for. I'm just pooring my thoughts and heart out. But I dont think that the essay turned out that effective or powerful. I have pretty low stats, so i really need this essay to boost my chances</p>
<p>ill read it...i'm in the same boat about needing a killer essay, so i'll let you know what i think</p>
<p>I'd like to read it too. I actually recently submitted my application.</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>i can read it</p>
<p>i'll read too</p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>i'll read it :)</p>