Is this too "creative"/"different". I need some input...

<p>I really need some feedback on my short 250 essay. I like my essay but I'm afraid that I was too different and creative in my appraoch and that I didn't answer the question well.</p>

<p>Help?</p>

<p>I'll give it a shot if you'd like.</p>

<p>What did you write about?</p>