Is this "Why UPenn" Essay Enjoyable to Read?

[Standingout]

<p>Last bump.</p>

[hanhngabg]

<p>I'll read it. Plz send me.</p>

[newjerseykid]

<p>not aplying to penn ill read it</p>

[shopaholic326]

<p>me neither.</p>

<p>still need a another critic, hit me up.</p>