<p>My AP English teacher said that my essay was well-written. However, part of my essay does not flow with the rest of it.
Can anyone please read this essay for me and give me some input? Thanks very much.</p>
<p>Sure, just PM it over.</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>pm me ill read it</p>
<p>I'll take a look.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it, if it isn't a problem.</p>
<p>i'll read it, pm it over.</p>
<p>can u send one to me too @ <a href="mailto:IiIdimsum7@gmail.com">IiIdimsum7@gmail.com</a> ? I would like to read it too.</p>
<p>i can also take a look if you still need it read</p>
<p>The comments I've been receiving are basically along the lines of needing more personal expression - and how it's shaped my life versus the emphasis on the community around me.</p>
<p>Are there any grammar nazis who want to correct my horrible sentence structure? haha :) or anyone who wants to deconstruct my essay and explain my weaknesses/strengths?</p>
<p>I'll start writing again soon. Thanks to everyone who read.</p>
<p>I'm a grammar nazi! Send it over.</p>
<p>id looove to help</p>
<p>Il give it a go</p>
<p>ill give a go <a href="mailto:kevintangeous@yahoo.com">kevintangeous@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>
<p>ill give it a go, if you like</p>
<p>i'll look at it if you want</p>
<p>I'm still editing it at the moment. I'll have it finished later on today.
I'll bump this thread up later.</p>
<p>Alright. It's where I want it to be before editing and revisions.
Any senior members of CC want to give BOTH prompts a read? Thanks!</p>
<p>pm me can you?</p>