<p>Long story short: all the essays I've written have been total crap, so I tried to write about something immensely personal and I think(???) I may have turned out something decent to send off today. I really want to be done with my 5 January apps tonight! </p>
<p>If anyone wants to read it, I'll read theirs too. PM me or IM me (AIM name is mandiiicomets). THANK YOU SO MUCH. I really do appreciate it - I need as many opinions as I can get. </p>
<p>Any tips on how to make the ending less awkward (one person said it was awkward, maybe it is or maybe it isn't) would be great</p>
<p>I caution you to not rush the process at this point. It's admirable that you've taken so many stabs at your essay. Get the feedback and then put it down for at least a few days. You can then pick it back up and see it with fresh eyes. The akward passages will be more noticable and you'll be able to find a fix. You just don't want to regret not sending off your absolutely best work. </p>