<p>Please post and I will PM you. Preferrably people out of HS.</p>
<p>i'll check it out for you</p>
<p>I know you said "preferably people out of HS", but I'm interested in helping you out. I'll be open up front: I'm a high school senior. If you don't want to send me your essay, I understand.</p>
<p>However, if it's worth anything, I've critiqued one other Common App essay (on height), and the original poster posted</a> his thanks.</p>
<p>you can pm me too.</p>
<p>I'll look at it</p>
<p>I'll take a look at it, also.</p>
<p>I'll check it out for you.</p>
<p>PM me plez</p>
<p>PM me i'll read.</p>
<p>Hmm, I'll read it. PM it over to me.</p>