Ivy League level essay? Please read

<p>I wrote an essay for Duke on the common app. It was about what cultural, social, or something else experience you've had that makes you better or what not. Would someone read it and see if it is good enough to round out my application? Kinda affraid to post it, i don't want it getting stolen!!!!</p>

<p>I know that essays might be stolen. I request you to pm me your essay after you are approved or not. Will that be fine? BTW, i m novice, so I can’t judge your essay</p>

<p>I can read and critique it for you, Im not applying to Duke also</p>

<p>PM it to me if you want</p>

<p>PM it to me… you should get ur AP eng teacher to give feedback (and previous eng teachers)</p>

<p>PM it to me</p>

<p>Hey you can pm it to me</p>

<p>(high post count compared to the rest)</p>

<p>PM me if you’d like.</p>

<p>Otherwise, good luck ;)</p>

<p>i can read it. not applying to duke.
can you email to <a href="mailto:michristmascarol@gmail.com">michristmascarol@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>PM me. Please include the exact prompt, word limit, etc.</p>