January SAT Writing Section

<p>zainuu, i don’t think they were all A, maybe like 2 were..yeah the teddy bear, was they will cherish them in the future.</p>

<p>i thought for the candidates one, “For Each” was wrong because it didn’t agree with “all of the candidates.” I thought you would revise it to “For every”</p>

<p>^ can someone second this? </p>

<p>is there a consensus on the bridge question?</p>

<p>bridge one was “did not” which was like C</p>

<p>teddy bear i got E…the cherished by one…</p>

<p>I think it should have been “for each candidate’s question” instead of “for each question”..the parallellism thing sounded weird</p>

<p>What was the sentence for the “him and me” thing?</p>

<p>And did anybody else get “In other words” for one of the fixing paragraph things? I thought that it shouldn’t be “however” or “although” because the two sentences weren’t contradictory.</p>

<p>yeah…him and me i put no error…
and i also put On other words…</p>

<p>him and me is wrong because nowhere in the sentence has the word “between” in it. Inorder to have him and me, you must have a preposition. the correct should be Him and I</p>

<p>does ‘for’ count as preposition…?
cause i put down him and i
because… i just didn’t wanna have another no error. lol</p>

<p>but
i thouught there was some kind of preposition before “him and me”. it just wasn’t the usual “between”.
but</p>

<h2>Shimshimhey, i hope ur right, cause that’s what i put. (are u korean)</h2>

<p>oh man, i thought i did well on writing… until i looked through these 8 pages. =////</p>

<p>Does someone remember the actual sentence? I can’t even remember if I marked “him and me” wrong anymore. Were there two different sentences with the whole he/him and me/I stuff?</p>

<p>what did you guys get for the ‘all but shutdown’ improving sentence.. it was the last one of teh 10 min. section i think.</p>

<p>lol ptoncollege09: yea i am.. learned all my writing skills from hakwon.</p>

<p>The candidate question I put no error because it meant that the candidates had prepared for each of the questions and it seemed correct grammatically, at least to me. If anyone remembers the sentence please feel free to share.</p>

<p>The him and I question was either No Error or it was something other than this. I remember considering this answer but I decided it was correct.</p>

<p>Bridge question was C (“didn’t” is supposed to be “hadn’t” or something like that)</p>

<p>And I, too, got a lot of C’s in the middle of the section. Maybe 3 in a roll and another one near by.</p>

<p>For the candidate question, I put “the answers” as incorrect.</p>

<p>The question read something like “blah blah blah, (for each) of (the answers) showed some signs of being rehearsed”.</p>

<p>Shouldn’t it be “for each of their answers”? It sounds better to me, but the original could be grammatically correct.</p>

<p>The question wasn’t “him and I” it was “him and me,” which wasn’t gramatically correct in context (or at least i was pretty sure it wasn’t).</p>

<p>what did you guys get for the replacement for “yet” in improving passages. </p>

<p>was it in other words, or however,…or nonetheless.. gahh. hated that one.</p>

<p>go read the top of the page</p>

<p>oo, my bad. that’s one person tho. =P</p>

<p>which section was experimental?
the first one or the second one (in a row)
i think the first one was facial expression</p>

<p>I’m pretty sure it was “in other words” because it was comparing two similar things. Like, “The cat was really pretty” and “the cat had beautiful eyes and shiny fur.” You wouldn’t say, “The cat was really pretty. However, the cat had had beautiful eyes and shiny fur.” You would say, “In other words.”</p>

<p>At least that was the context I got out of it.</p>