<p>Definition of diffuse…
1 : being at once verbose and ill-organized <a diffuse=“” report=“” from=“” the=“” scene=“” of=“” earthquake=“”>
2 : not concentrated or localized <diffuse lighting=“”></diffuse></a></p><a diffuse=“” report=“” from=“” the=“” scene=“” of=“” earthquake=“”>
<p>so the answer is spare… i am pretty sure</p>
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<p>yeah … there was a sentence saying “sine cats do not have nearly diseases”</p>
<p>deleting nearly?</p>
<p>Yea it was spare and for example. I also put is growing.</p>
<p>yea the sentence was: since cats do not have nearly as many bone diseases as dogs, this explanation seems to be the one.</p>
<p>I thought the best was to improve was to make “seems to be the one” –> “is certainly plausible”</p>
<p>ya but the question in the exam wasnt nearly as correct as ^^</p>
<p>Any one know is the essay count into the writing section score? I see some people with 11 on the essay but still 800 on the writing section.</p>
<p>ya but the question in the exam wasnt nearly as correct as ^^
^
What was the answer then? ://</p>
<p>CONSOLIDATED LIST (non-experimental)
-please confirm, correct, improve, elaborate wherever you can
-Venus Williams section was experimental
-currently thinking there were 2 no errors</p>
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<p>ERROR IDENTIFICATION
compared Jupiter’s weather to Earth — “Earth” should be “that of Earth”
Although …, but … — Although is redundant so answer is A
sister and I put our hand in lake — should be “hands”
Stonehenge question — “has been” wrong tense
a woman who would have “went” to college — should be “would have gone”
women became a person in their own right — plurality mismatch on “a person”
… one …, you — pronoun inconsistency, “you” is the error
Number of something, …, “are growing” — should be “is growing”
intent about — should be “intent on”
enjoyed opera more than all types of performance — should be “all other types”
“That their works were criticized by famous artist who … no surprise to …” — no error
i got #29 (last of section) as no error. anyone remember the question? anyone confirm?</p>
<p>PARAGRAPH BASED
In my case…
insert after the first sentence about scientists, i think #8
delete the sentence
“They also” purr when they are stressed
Cats purr when content; for example, my cat…</p>
<h2>“seems to be the one” –> “is certainly plausible” OR delete nearly?</h2>
<p>SECTION 10</p>
<h1>12 D “as a result of either”</h1>
<p>Draconian question(#13) Fine as is. “as is indicated by…” A</p>
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<p>I believe there was some misplaced modifier as #28. Bla bla bla, wrong subject …
Can anyone confirm this?</p>
<p>I put that as well ccuser9023.</p>
<p>I put “is certainly plausible” b/c seems to be the one is just oddly worded.</p>
<p>hmm, I remember I was stuck between the “nearly as correct as” or the “plausible” choice…</p>
<p>did anyone get the dinosaur question
from improving sentences?</p>
<p>and there was one thats like (identifying error)
Although implements … but …</p>
<p>&& the last error question #29
something about fashion students, …
was there an error for that if anyone remembered?</p>
<p>Wait the one about being criticized by the famous artist is no error? I put “that” as the error.</p>
<p>xxsleepyhead - i think the dinosaur one is the one listed as redundancy error on consolidated list.</p>
<p>also, does anyone remember a question where 3 foods or something were being compared and “more” was used instead of “most” ?</p>
<p>I put “is certainly plausible” b/c seems to be the one is just oddly worded.
^
Wow…how did I not notice that during the test??</p>
<p>Fail. - . -</p>
<p>**what did you all write for the essay topic **
i used the quote “opposites attract” a book i made up . . .
i hate this essay topic =.=</p>
<p>^Yep. 10 char.</p>
<p>i thought it was delete nearly for the cats question</p>
<p>For my essay, I talked about the immigration problem (referred to the new law in Arizona) and issues with racial diversity/tensions/violence within America.</p>
<p>can someone explain why they chose to delete “nearly” in the cats question?</p>