<p>what about the childern and the molars? was that leave as is?</p>
<p>^ can you elaborate on the question?? children and molars?</p>
<p>I did something very similar fledgling. I talked about examples throughout history where people self segregate by class, race, wealth, etc.</p>
<p>can you elaborate on the question?? children and molars?
^ Something like…when children first start brushing their teeth, they should pay attention to brushing molars…?</p>
<p>children brushing teeth attention must be paid</p>
<p>So what was the conclusion on I think 29 or the one where it started it off with That their work was critcized? I said the that was wrong. Also what was the answer to the either and result question as well as the chinese one?</p>
<p>children brushing teeth attention must be paid
… Was that the right choice or the original error?</p>
<p>I thought the essay was good, I used:
- Holden Caulfield (Catcher in the Rye)
- American Revolution
- Democratic/Republican parties (incorporated the recent health care issue)</p>
<p>Hopefully got a 11+</p>
<p>What was the dinosaur question, because that one was little tricky, does anyone remember?</p>
<p>What was the dinosaur question, because that one was little tricky, does anyone remember? </p>
<p>I used Catcher too. :)</p>
<p>Dinosaur question was the one that was like the term…,was coined in year #, though scientists knew…</p>
<p>I’m pretty sure there was an error in that one.</p>
<p>There was an error. I posted the answer I chose. :p</p>
<p>Want to add my answers to stuff previously stated
“is certainly plausible”
and for the teeth, they should pay attention to brushing molars</p>
<p>CONSOLIDATED LIST (non-experimental)
-please confirm, correct, improve, elaborate wherever you can
-Venus Williams section was experimental
-currently thinking there were 2 no errors</p>
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<p>ERROR IDENTIFICATION (14/18)
compared Jupiter’s weather to Earth — “Earth” should be “that of Earth”
Although …, but … — Although is redundant so answer is A
sister and I put our hand in lake — should be “hands”
three things were being compared and “more” was used — should be “most”
Stonehenge question — “has been” wrong tense
a woman who would have “went” to college — should be “would have gone”
women became a person in their own right — plurality mismatch on “a person”
… one …, you — pronoun inconsistency, “you” is the error
Number of something, …, “are growing” — should be “is growing”
intent about — should be “intent on”
enjoyed opera more than all types of performance — should be “all other types”
molars question – pay attention to
“That their works were criticized by famous artist who … no surprise to …” — no error
i got #29 (last of section) as no error. anyone remember the question? anyone confirm?</p>
<p>PARAGRAPH BASED (6/6)
In my case…
insert after the first sentence about scientists, i think #8
delete the sentence
“They also” purr when they are stressed
Cats purr when content; for example, my cat…</p>
<h2>“seems to be the one” –> “is certainly plausible” (delete nearly?)</h2>
<p>SECTION 10</p>
<h1>12 D “as a result of either”</h1>
<h2>Draconian question(#13) Fine as is. “as is indicated by…” A</h2>
<p>I believe there was some misplaced modifier as #28. Bla bla bla, wrong subject …
Can anyone confirm this?</p>
<p>What section was the dinosaur question in?</p>
<p>does the essay count into the writing section score?</p>
<p>I agree with phxfire.</p>
<p>so is the last question “nearly” or “plausible”?</p>
<p>^i am fairly sure it is “plausible”. In context, I don’t think “seems to be the one” was very clear at all and it is awkward anyways. Nobody has yet presented a reason to put “nearly”</p>
<p>when I plugged it in plausible ran smoothly and made sense, what does everyone else think?</p>
<p>There was one in the rewording sentences that’s subject, “disintegration of …”, had to be moved closer to the comma…</p>
<p>Nearly makes sense, it’s plausible.</p>