<p>I hope -1…I don’t know of any I got wrong so far but it is always good to have a cushion for silly mistakes.</p>
<p>YAY OF COURSE… I was not sure about that one. How about where to start a new paragraph? At the sentence that started with of course, or the next sentence?</p>
<p>I think it was the next sentence (started with However, or something like that?).</p>
<p>It was something like horses are also useful because people are drawn to them…???</p>
<p>Maybe…what did you put? I don’t think it was before “Of course,” because that was speaking of how the different patients use the horses differently.</p>
<p>yeah u were supposed to start a new one when it started changing the subject to like distinctly horses, i think</p>
<p>It was relatively obvious when that happened right? I am pretty sure I got it.</p>
<p>I put of course and to start the paragraph at the sentence that began with… ‘horses are also useful because people are drawn to them.’</p>
<p>Oh yeah that’s right…that’s what I put.</p>
<p>yeah i said that too! yay yay yay. for the Indian one, did you say “my parents moved to Delhi, where Hindi was spoken” (A: no change)?</p>
<p>…there was another option (B, I believe?) that said something like “…where people speak Hindi” but i thought that was incorrect because it’s suddenly present tense.</p>
<p>I think I chose to omit that part of the sentence.</p>
<p>…I dont think that was even an option.</p>
<p>and if it was, why would u even omit it anyway? its a necessary piece of info thats central to the entire essay</p>
<p>No, it said something in the sentence before about the difference in language between the cities so you don’t need to repeat it in the next sentence.</p>
<p>i dont even think omit was an option.</p>
<p>and it talked about learning hindi in the next sentence, but the sentence we’re talking about (the one you corrected) was where it would establish WHY they are being exposed to hindi now.</p>
<p>I agree with the omit.</p>
<p>Moving to a different question- Did you keep the information that was like “some people sit on the horses sideways, while others lay prone,etc.”? I chose to keep it in.</p>
<p>Well maybe we are talking about different questions because I swear I omitted something similar to that in the India passage.</p>
<p>I also put the information on the different positions in.</p>
<p>ya ur supposed to keep that (since its more specific)</p>
<p>“Delhi, India,” vs. “Delhi, India;” ?</p>
<p>Dehli, India, is what I put.</p>