Just finished Common App essay, anyone interested in reading it?

College Essays
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<p>I would just like a little input on the Common App essay that I just wrote. The main concept of it is that I am "satirizing" the typical college essay and then branch off into a personal experience that shows my individuality. I hope that it is good =]</p>

<p>Any comments would be much appreciated! Just leave a message and I'll PM you the goods haha. Just don't take my idea. That wouldn't be cool!</p>

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<p>PM me if you’d like. Rising freshman at Princeton, so I’ve been through the process. (though this is my first CC essay)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll definitely read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it… PM it to me if you like!</p>

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<p>pm me if you want.</p>

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<p>I already graduated from high school and I actualy help other students in thier college process so I don’t mind editing. :]</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a read.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. By the way is a PM an e-mail, or do we have to be online when someone attempts to PM us?</p>

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<p>PM me the essay!</p>

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<p>I sent the essay to all of you, thanks a lot! Any more takers?</p>

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<p>right here!!! I’ll take a look lol pm it to me</p>

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<p>Can I take a look?</p>

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<p>i’d love to take a look too …PM me</p>

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<p>I’d love to take a look! (and edit if you want)
PM me!</p>

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<p>I can take a look.</p>

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<p>May I read it? Please PM me, I’m already curious.</p>

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<p>pm it over :)</p>

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<p>I have sent it over to all of you now. </p>

<p>I am officially closing this thread and will not send it to any more people. I have gotten such fantastic feedback and many of it has been very similar, so I plan on putting more work into this essay before putting it up again, reformed and hopefully a bit better. Thank you all so much for your comments!</p>