Just Finished. Draft. Any Volunteers? :D

College Essays
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<p>About 1 pg.
Draft.
Some grammatical errors/ redundancies I plan to fix, but I want to know if i'm on the right track.
Please!!
Help would be appreciated.</p>

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<p>bump.........</p>

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<p>anyone?...</p>

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<p>ahh. bump???? hahahah</p>

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<p>Hi there. I'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>hiya, message me i can look at it. but im no expert!</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you'd like.</p>