<p>Would anyone be willing to give me a few pointers? I think its pretty good but has the potential to be great. It focuses on my passion for sports.</p>
<p>PM me the essay with the prompt and i’ll offer some feedback</p>
<p>thanks! i sent it over in 2 msgs because it was too big for 1</p>
<p>anyone else wanna take a look?</p>
<p>id really like another opinion if anyone would like to help</p>