Just Wrote a Very Risky Essay - Would Appreciate Feedback!

Applying to College
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Hey guys,

I just wrote a risky essay for the University of Pennsylvania (which, to my understanding, appreciates quirkiness).

I’d really love to hear a 2nd opinion or two before I send it in!

Would anyone mind taking a look? Drop me an e-mail at (Raven[AT]ultraSW.com) if interested, or just reply here with an e-mail where I can reach you.

Thanks!

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<p>private message me, id be happy to read it, I read my friends early decision penn essay and she got in! idk if it was because of me but it could have helped. say which prompt it is</p>

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<p>Umm...where did you get the impression that Penn appreciates quirkiness?</p>

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<p>pm me w/ the essay</p>

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<p>you can pm me also.</p>

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<p>you can pm too</p>

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<p>Thanks guys :) You all have PMs...!</p>

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<p>Now that I have all my apps done, I would like to read it too!</p>

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<p>PM me with it too? Thanks</p>

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<p>You both have PMs! :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me too</p>

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<p>Thanks Paradox, but it's already been sealed in an envelope, so I'd rather not get any more feedback.. </p>

<p>Thanks for the offer though!</p>