Just wrote my update for Brown. Was hoping someone could read :)

<p>I just wrote my update that I’ll be sending Brown because I got waitlisted. It’s a tad lengthy, but I feel everything in it is important. I’m not looking for a grammatical check on anything, but if you catch one or two things, feel free to bring it to my attention. I just want someone to take a read and tell me what they think about it. I’ll most likely be sending it to your e-mail, so please list your e-mail. My e-mail is <a href="mailto:russiaruns@yahoo.com">russiaruns@yahoo.com</a>, so if you’re going to read it look for that e-mail :). </p>

<p>Please and thank you :)</p>