<p>Yes, I think we here folks at CC would enjoy deep stories. I much prefer them to high school love stories.</p>
<p>I’m a writer also (yes, published), and I have to say I agree with everything Aquiana said. All that, plus the grammar/conventions/etc. mistakes ground on my nerves- can’t help but being a grammar Nazi. Sorry, but just trying to be truthful. Thanks for being brave (I know it can be so personal at times) and posting! :)</p>
<p>Oh my god! I was reading over all these posts and you guys gave me the greatest idea ever! I know what to do with this story now. I think I have what it was missing now! Ah! I’m really happy… Thanks everyone! You really did help a lot!</p>
<p>it wasn’t deep literature, but it was nice for one of those occasional stories I read once in a while for some less in depth enjoyment 
I liked it.</p>
<p>EDIT: I probably should have read more of the previous posts before commenting. congrats on the inspiration Dan!</p>
<p>Omg, published author! How old are you and how did you get pub lished?</p>