Kind of pointless now, but if someone could please give me some insights/feedbacks..

<p>I posted this thread before but only like 1-2 people send me back with feedbacks/suggestions. I guess since the deadline has passes, there'll be no copying of other people's ideas or whatnot. Could anyone please take a look at my common app and harvard supplement essay and give me some "this is how I felt" kinds of feedbacks?</p>

<p>Thanks! =)</p>

<p>I will look at it.</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it.</p>

<p>i'll read it.</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>ill read it</p>