Kinda late, but can someone look at my CommonApp short answer?

College Essays
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<p>Hey,</p>

<p>I already submitted this to one school, which may be a bit problematic. I tried to be kind of abstract, and it kind of makes more sense considering that I want to pursue an Urban Studies major (and that I also got a rec from an attorney at a law firm that would go into more detail about what I did). I would be SO greatful if I could PM it to someone before I send it to WashU (or write a new one, and send that).</p>

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<p>I’ll read it for you…</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, too.</p>

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<p>sure, pm me</p>

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<p>you used a lot of “kinda” and “kind of” in your thread…
anyway, i kinda want to help</p>

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<p>Sure, I’d love to read it… and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account… but I’d prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>