<p>im am just dying to send this to common app right now only problem it is loo long can anyone quickly check on my essays and help cut it down to 700 words? plus if you see anything wrong with it please let me know
thank you</p>
<p>plus I dont want to rush anybody replying but i need answers that to the point, are constructive criticism, and has to be hlpful</p>
<p>I can help you read it now.</p>
<p>alright ill it to you</p>
<p>ill have to send it you in 2 pts. thing is too long</p>