Last minute advice/feedback for UC prompt 1 essay?

<p>I was hoping to submit tonight but I'm not sure if this essay is good enough. Please shoot me a pm and I'll send it to you. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>If you still need help, I can edit it for you.</p>

<p>PM me</p>

<p>^Thanks both of you but I’ve already submitted.</p>