Last minute edit. Could anyone help me with the essay?

<p>I am doing the Yale application right now and I am struggled with the essay. The essay topic is quite open-minded. However, I am not sure if I should use my princeton essay ( I was deferred in ED)or the new one I just finished. Both are far from my expectation. Time is running out and I desparatly need some help now.</p>

<p>Please PM me if you want to read my essays...I will appreciate any suggestion/advice/criticism...</p>