<p>Ok, i know its a little late, but can anyone read and give quick tips on my essay? Just finished it, trying to choose between this or my other Pg. 217…</p>
<p>PM’s, or AOL?</p>
<p><strong>please?</strong></p>
<p>I could...I had the same problem as you (deciding between pg. 217 and first experience essay I wrote). I'm just relieved that it's all over!</p>
<p>you can pm me bro, or aim me</p>
<p>I finished my application to P-ton. I'll read ur essay.</p>
<p>thanx, y'all. i really dont want to submit a raw essay :(</p>
<p>BIG thank you to all....i know it was cramped time, but i just got back from TN and a soccer game, so I was pretty satisfied with the result, for one day's work. If i get in I'm SO going to be happy (that sounded so corny).</p>
<p>Helix, what happened? You didn't come through for me.....(;)) just kidding, u know i would never say such a thing, lol</p>
<p>I'll read it if you still need help</p>
<p>if anyone wants to read it feel free, but unless i can get my app back for the extended deadline, its rather pointless for me, except to see if its any good....</p>
<p>send it to me, hehe</p>
<p>ill read and critique it</p>