last-minute look over my nyu supplement?

I know this is sorta last minute, but I’m getting pretty nervous. (I’ve done much revising and have had others look over it as well) But does anyone want to look over it real quick for me?

i would love to take a look

I’d be willing to take a look at it and anyone else’s supplements, share it with me at vogon176123@gmail.com

I’ll only be looking at grammar/spelling/writing mechanics, and not content.

I’ll read it, PM me. I was accepted into CAS as an ED1 applicant.

Just so you don’t think I’m stealing your essays