<p>I finished mine over a month ago.
I don't know why but I'm still not satisfied with it.
It's TOO long, maybe that's why.
But, I don't know what to take out and how to make it better.</p>
<p>Anyone willing to help?
Let me knowww !</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>if you need a critique for the essay, pm it to me.</p>
<p>Don't post or pm your essay to anyone until you've read this thread:
<a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/258179-how-safely-use-cc-essay-advice-without-getting-ripped-off.html%5B/url%5D">http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/258179-how-safely-use-cc-essay-advice-without-getting-ripped-off.html</a></p>