Lastish draft for UC essays. Read 'em please?

<p>Hellloooo
I've been working on my essays all through this month, mostly getting revisions done by my transfer counselor. While he's been an incredible help, I'd like to get some other opinions on my essays, particularly so I can see if my essays project a strong enough image for people who don't know me. I'm a transfer student, aiming for UC Berkeley or LA, English major. </p>

<p>I would prefer people who have some experience with essays, but I guess it's kinda futile being picky since time is so short. </p>

<p>Post if you're able to read over my essays. Thanks!</p>