Late UMich Essay

College Essays
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<p>Essay Question: At the University of Michigan, we are committed to building a superb educational community with students of diverse talents, experiences, opinions and cultural backgrounds. What would you as an individual bring to our campus community? </p>

<p>Tried to answer the question as unconventionally as I could. The subject matter is rather ironic when you consider how late I'm applying.</p>

<p>I'll PM anyone that wants to critique my essay. Its short (250 words), so it won't take too much of your time. Thanks in advance</p>

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<p>Hi</p>

<p>I would be glad to provide you with some constructive critisism. Send me a PM if you like :) I hope to hear from you :P</p>

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<p>Hi, I'll read your essay. PM me and I'll read it when I have a sec.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys, is there anyone else that can help me out really quick?</p>

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<p>I d like to read</p>

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<p>Thanks...</p>

<p>Still looking for more input. Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Bumperooni</p>

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<p>What if I said pretttttty please??? :)</p>

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<p>Hi,</p>

<p>Sorry but I don't think I received your PM :( If you would like me to review it, I would be more than happy to.</p>

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<p>Whoops...yeah that's because I didn't send it to you ;). </p>

<p>But now I did :). Thanks for helping.</p>

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<p>Come onnnnnn people...I need to know if its toooooo risky or not...</p>

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<p>Take a chance on yourself & go with your essay. If YOU like it, that is what matters. Instead of looking to others to tell you whether or not it's okay, spend that time editing what you have. </p>

<p>By the way, you are really late with the app. You need to get that in as soon as possible. I know students who should have been admitted to U of M but were turned down simply because they waited too long!</p>