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College Essays
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<p>Hey every one, I am a rising senior and am looking for people that can give me there criticism on my essay. And let me be clear..when I say criticism, I mean BRUTAL FEEDBACK!! lol. This is a constructive experience, so please don't hold anything back. </p>

<p>I appreciate every one that wants to help, but I must ask that you have already graduated in order to read and help.</p>

<p>Please post if you just want me to PM you.</p>

<p>THANKS!</p>

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<p>you can send me a PM.
I will be plenty harsh, and very detailed too. obv the main goal is for you to end up with a better essay. I graduated in June btw.</p>

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<p>Glad to see that you are open to criticism!!</p>

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<p>I'll read it...I'm a parent, I can be blunt.</p>

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<p>PM me. I'd be happy to read it for you.</p>

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<p>PM me, I would be happy to help</p>

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<p>atlatl, you are amazing :)</p>

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<p>PM me, I will help!</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>

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<p>I can give you brutal feedback.</p>

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<p>Feel free to pm me as well.</p>

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<p>Feel free to pm me too</p>

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<p>Feel free to pm me as well.</p>