<p>I need opinions on my UChicago essay, which is yet to be cut-down. I just kind of sat down and wrote it, so I would like to know what possible edits I can make. Ways I can make it better, if it's actually interesting, if it's totally off-base.
I don't want to sound typical but I've never written an app essay before...
PM me if you're interested, if you're an adult or graduated senior even better.</p>
<p>I'm applying to UofC this year, too, but I answered prompt 2. PM me, if you want. :)</p>
<p>I'll read it. I'm class of 2012, so no worries there.</p>
<p>graduated senior =]</p>
<p>I can read. I'm good at grammar too</p>
<p>I'd love to read it. I'm not applying to Chicago (and I'm a good writer :-)).
PM it to me.</p>
<p>hit me up... i read tons of chicago aps</p>
<p>pm it to me....UofC essays are always so fun to read
(brown 2012 so no problems there)</p>
<p>I graduated from Brown this year. But I've heard about Uchicago essays and there fun topics. I would love to read one! PM it to me =)</p>
<p>PM me :] i'd love to read</p>
<p>pm ill give it a glance</p>
<p>PM it. I actually want to become an editor so I need the practice. I'm great with grammar and IMHO can give some good input.</p>
<p>pm and I'll read it</p>
<p>ill read it pm</p>
<p>i'd love to read a uchic essay :) pm away</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM me :)</p>
<p>PM me too. Im not applying to uchicago..honestly.</p>
<p>pm it overr i got into uchicago 2 years ago</p>
<p>i'd like to read it :)</p>
<p>if you want to know, i'm doing uchic's essay topic 3 and have already finished my first draft.</p>
<p>ill read it, im applying to u of c too and if you want to read mine too, ill send you it</p>