Living in my sister's shadow: Can somebody read my essay?

<p>PM me if interested with your email please. It's a good one. At least i think it is. But additional help will be FANTABULOSO-ly appreciated! =)</p>

<p>please. Please. PLEASE...</p>

<p>TEAR THIS ESSAY APART!!! </p>

<p>I need to make this essay good for purposes discussed in my essay.</p>

<p>ill take a look pm</p>

<p>me too. might be a bit late, but i'll try.</p>

<p>sounds like an interesting topic.. I'll read it</p>