Living in my sister's shadow: Can somebody read my essay?

<p>PM me if interested with your email please. It's a good one. At least i think it is. But additional help will be FANTABULOSO-ly appreciated! =)</p>

<p>please. Please. PLEASE...</p>

<p>TEAR THIS ESSAY APART!!! </p>

<p>I need to make this essay good for purposes discussed in my essay.
preferably by a senior member. =)</p>

<p>i'll look it over, but I'm only a lowly "Member" not a senior member..but if you don't get a senior member, you can PM it to me..</p>

<p>thanks a lot for the great comments "siren." </p>

<p>Any other takers? It's a good one.</p>

<p>Sure- but when is it due? I can give you a read from an adult perspective.</p>

<p>it's due monday.
=)
i'll send u a PM mom</p>

<p>Thanks mom for taking the time to read my essay. Very much appreciated.
Any other takers?</p>