Would anyone be willing to read and critique my LOCI? There are so many different opinions about length and content that I want to gather as many reviews as possible before sending it out. I’ll send it over PM if anyone is willing to take a look. Thanks in advance! 
I will offer a brief critique if you PM it to me. Based on your qualifications, I am surprised that you were deferred.
@Publisher Thanks very much for offering your help rlly appreciate it. And yeah, I’m not surprised by the deferral but a little stumped in general.