Look at my SAT essay please.

Test Preparation
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<p>I think I deserved a better score than what I got which was a 6 total.</p>

<p><a href="https://nsat.collegeboard.com/satweb/scorereport/essayImageAction.do?pageNum=1%5B/url%5D"&gt;https://nsat.collegeboard.com/satweb/scorereport/essayImageAction.do?pageNum=1&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p><a href="https://nsat.collegeboard.com/satweb/scorereport/essayImageAction.do?pageNum=2%5B/url%5D"&gt;https://nsat.collegeboard.com/satweb/scorereport/essayImageAction.do?pageNum=2&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>Can I have them rescore the essay if I took it back in April?</p>

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<p>Dangit I gotta upload them myself.</p>

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<p><a href="http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l202/SigmaCentauri/SATEssay1.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l202/SigmaCentauri/SATEssay1.jpg&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

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<p>i think your essays are good, but the thing which contributed your score to a 6 maybe your lack of specific examples,, if you could have been able to give just one specific example apart from those claims that you were making, you could have had a better score easily and deservedly.</p>

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<p>I think your ideas were very good but, agreeing w/ the person before me, your examples need to be more specific. Also, the college board grades on organization. It is always nice to mention all of your subpoints in your intro so the reader can follow along easier (what my english teacher told me). when writing timed essays its always good to follow the impromptu structure (anecdote, thesis, subpoints, tie to thesis, etc.) </p>

<p>i hope i did ok on my essay today...... i'm so scared i didn't do very well......</p>

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<p>Meh oh well. I got 700v, 660m, and 650w anyway.</p>

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<p>That's bull*****! You ought to have gotten a better score.</p>

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<p>Thank you...I wish there was a way they could recheck it. Maybe if I complain?</p>