<p>Hey guys, can anybody have a look at my essay and critique the content. I would like 2013ers to please help me.</p>
<p>well, ive already submitted my apps and stuff so its your choice. i can edit if u want. PM it over</p>
<p>just sent you. Plz anybody else also wanna critique the essay. I want multiple opinions</p>
<p>bumpity bump. Anyone else for a take on my essay. Plz I am outta time and I need quick opinions.</p>
<p>Send it over and I’ll read it in the morning. Care to trade? I’d like opinions on my Amherst essay as well.</p>