<p>1) I would like constructive criticism of any form.</p>
<p>2) Also, any advice to cut out parts, or help the piece flow more altogether. </p>
<p>This is a Common APP essay.</p>
<p>3) Also, do you find my topic to be to cliche?</p>
<p>if you're interested, just reply, and I'll PM you. </p>
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