Looking for critiques on an essay in its final stages...

<p>If anyone is up to it, pm or post and I will get in contact with you.
Thanks!</p>

<p>HAI!!...can edit lOL...i need to stop posting :(</p>

<p>PM me. I like to edit.</p>

<p>I'll read it :)</p>

<p>I am glad to offer you my humble oponions</p>

<p>I'll help!</p>