Looking For Editor of Two Short Paragraphs

College Essays
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<p>For starters, I sincerely apologize if i make any mistakes or errors in posting this. i literally just made an account in hopes of getting some help. </p>

<p>I have two sort paragraphs (250 words or less) that I need help proof reading. I normally would ask an old english teacher of mine but I have already asked her to proofread five different essays and in hopes of sparring her time (and sanity), I'm looking for help from someone on these forums.
I saw a locked post that I shouldn't just post my essay for privacy reasons and that I should find a well respected forum donator. Problem is, i don't really know who to ask on here. So if you think you could spend 10 minutes looking at my paragraphs, that would be great.</p>

<p>Thank you,
FutureTrojan1</p>

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<p>Anyone? I realize it is a Sunday night and is a day of rest, but I’m hoping to have one last set of eyes look over it before I submit it tonight. (The due date is Dec 1st if i want to be automatically considered for scholarships).</p>

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<p>PM me. I will give you a quick feedback.</p>

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<p>Thank you! @eCoachJen‌ </p>

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<p>If anyone else could look over them, it would be greatly appreciated. The more the merrier! </p>

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<p>I will be happy to read it and comment. </p>