Looking for feedback on an essay

<p>Would anybody be willing to give me some feedback on a one-page essay that I wrote for a competitive college? Please PM me if you are willing. Thanks!</p>

<p>P.S. I'll look at and make corrections to anybody's essay if they return the favor. I've been told I'm an excellent writer (for what my stupid English teacher's opinion is worth).</p>

<p>sure, pm it over</p>

<p>Or just post your interest in this thread to get a PM.</p>