Looking for feedback on first draft of common app essay

<p>Hey, I just wrote my essay for the common app prompt #5. I'd appreciate any kind of feedback you have to give me.</p>

<p>If you're interested, I'll PM you the essay.</p>

<p>Feel free to PM it to me. I’ll proofread it and provide guidance.</p>

<p>i’ll read it/give feedback!</p>

<p>I’ll look over it (but I tend to nitpick and tear stuff apart). PM me if you want.</p>

<p>I’ve PM’d it to both of you. Don’t be afraid to hurt my feelings haha.</p>

<p>i will read it for you.</p>

<p>i’ll read it</p>

<p>I’m a terrible, mean person when it comes to reviewing writing, but I’d be happy to read it if you like. PM me up.</p>

<p>I will read</p>

<p>Thanks all, I’ll send it to you all once I get my second draft done. I’ve already had draft #1 read by 3 people and I know what needs fixing.</p>