Looking for feedback on my 100-250words essays

Heya!

I’m an international student applying to MIT this year, and I’d love to hear some feedback about the drafts I’ve come up with. They’re quite personal, and I’m really not sure about them yet - I did answer the prompts honestly by writing down what came to mind, but I’m not sure if I might not have missed the point. Which is why it’d be awesome to hear some third-party feedback!

Thank you very much,

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