Looking for last minute critique on Common App Essay

<p>Would any of you be willing to read it? </p>

<p>Brutal honesty is both condoned and appreciated. ;P</p>

<p>You can pm me, and I don’t think you used the word condoned the way you intended haha.</p>

<p>Haha thank you, and I knew there would be one. I suppose it’s not entirely accurate. I mean that though brutal honesty might be considered to be rude in some scenarios, I accept it.</p>

<p>Also, I don’t believe I can send PMs yet… is there another way?</p>