I am applying regular decision to Georgetown and it is my dream school. I would love for someone who goes there, an alumni, or someone who goes to a similarly ranked university to read over my essay and let me know what they think! Any help is greatly appreciated 
Be very careful about who you send any college essay to. Be sure it is an adult with all my posting history on CC.
IMO you would be best off showing the essays to a trusted English teacher in your HS.
I will give a brief critique if you PM the writings to me.