Looking for readers for my college essays

College Essays
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<p>Anyone want to read and critique my two UC application essays (Already turned in)? I might be incorporating them into my common app. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, wanna swap? I’ve been editing mine all day and I just can’t get it right.</p>

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<p>Okay pm me yours!</p>

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<p>Sure! Just PM me!</p>

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<p>PM’d it hahah</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it- PM me</p>

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<p>Anyone else want to read?</p>

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<p>PM me if you like an adult’s perspective. I don’t promise you praises, but I promise to be honest and fair.</p>

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<p>I’ll do it!! PM yours ( lol im new to this so i might be a bit slow) ive already incorportaed my background essay into my common app, a lot of my friends liked it so i feel pretty good about it!!!</p>

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<p>Sent!
@powergirl23 . I’m not sure if you can PM me with those posts</p>

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<p>Anyone else want to proofread my essay? :-)</p>

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<p>Wanna swap?</p>

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<p>Bump! I need to decide between my two essays which to use for common app</p>

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<p>PM me your essays and I’ll help you out!</p>

<p>Please return the favor and help with mine!! (:
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1436568-help-william-mary-supplement-will-help-back-if-asked.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1436568-help-william-mary-supplement-will-help-back-if-asked.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>Sure! Will be sending</p>

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<p>Buuump, anyone else want to help?</p>