<p>Its about a significant event and its impact, but I have two different drafts. I'd like to know which is better and I'd like it to be critiqued.</p>
<p>Anyone? The deadline is Jan. 1 and I’d like some feedback from people who have already finished their essays. I’m also willing to critique others.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at yours if you look at mine. Deal? PM me.</p>
<p>cool
anyone else?</p>
<p>Anyone whose online? I’ll read yours too :)</p>
<p>Its due Jan. 1, and I don’t know which to use. I’d really appreciate advice from some good readers…</p>
<p>I’ll read it. PM it over. :)</p>
<p>sure send it over</p>
<p>sure, i’ll read. send it over (:</p>
<p>thanks pm’d everyone</p>
<p>anyone else??</p>
<p>i’ll read others</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine</p>