looking for some feedback on my "why nu" essay?

<p>I decided to do some last minute editing on my "Why Northwestern" essay today and I was hoping someone here would give me some constructive feedback on what I've written..?</p>

<p>I'll send you a PM if you would be so kind. :)</p>

<p>I'd be happy to help.</p>

<p>same. :)</p>

<p>ditto above :)</p>

<p>same, already sent in my apps!</p>

<p>feel free to send it over... I'll critique content, admittedly I'm not the best grammar editor. :)</p>

<p>I love editing stuff! PM me :)</p>

<p>I'll take a look at them. I sent in my apps too a few days a go. can you send them?</p>

<p>how long are these supposed to be? is 586 words legit?</p>

<p>sure, i'll help too. :)</p>

<p>would any of you guys mind helping me on my why NU essay???</p>

<p>pm me if you want another critique. thanks.</p>

<p>Go ahead and PM it! :)</p>

<p>Hey, I was accepted at Northwestern ED. Feel free to send it over. :-)</p>